It seems a bit repetitive throughout. if you cut it down and just said it was a loop id be great. it doesnt really fit as a full song though, it needs to have a growth in it. have it get more upbeat and/or add more sound to the middle. this is a great start, and if you built on it a bit more it could become a great piece
The begging is a little slow and could use a few more layers. after it shifts out of the recording into the real beet it becomes very good. could still use a few more layers throughout and the top sharp electonic sound could be toned down a bit. hope that helps.
A few more layers of what? Message please
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amazing peice. would be great for a battle sequence or something
Yeah I hope this gets used in a few submissions.
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